Row B is scored on a 0-4 scale based on how specifically you use evidence and how well your commentary connects that evidence to your thesis. Since there is no passage in front of you, evidence comes from memory: named characters, specific scenes, dialogue you recall, imagery patterns, structural choices. Vague plot summary earns 1 point at most. Specific evidence with analysis that explains how it supports your argument earns 3 or 4 points.
- Specific evidence: A named character action, a recalled scene, a quoted or paraphrased line, or a structural detail that is precise enough to be verified in the text.
- Commentary: The analysis that explains how your evidence supports your thesis. Commentary answers 'so what?' and connects the detail to your interpretive claim.
- Plot summary: Retelling what happens without explaining its significance. Plot summary alone earns minimal Row B credit.
For each piece of evidence you plan to use, can you write one to two sentences explaining exactly how it supports your thesis, not just what it shows?
| Row B score | What the essay does |
|---|
| 4 pts | Uses multiple specific details with consistent commentary that advances the argument |
| 3 pts | Uses specific evidence with commentary, but analysis is uneven or one piece is underdeveloped |
| 2 pts | Uses some specific evidence but commentary is thin or mostly descriptive |
| 1 pt | Relies on plot summary or vague references with little to no analysis |
| 0 pts | No evidence or evidence is entirely irrelevant to the prompt |