Evidence + Commentary = Logical Connection
Core principle: Evidence alone is insufficient. Commentary must establish why the evidence matters to your claim.
- Evidence: The specific fact, quote, example, or data you cite
- Commentary: Your explanation of how that evidence supports your claim
- The link: Commentary reveals the logical relationship between evidence and argument
Test yourself: If you removed the commentary, would a reader understand why you included that evidence? If no, you need stronger commentary.



