The complexity point is the seventh and final rubric point. It requires your essay to demonstrate a complex understanding of the historical development in the prompt. This is not a separate paragraph you add at the end. It must be woven into your argument through one of four recognized moves: explaining both similarity and difference, explaining both continuity and change, explaining multiple causes or effects, or explaining relevant connections across time periods, geographic areas, or themes.
- Corroboration: Explaining how multiple documents together support a more nuanced argument than any single document could. This is one path to complexity.
- Tension or contradiction: Identifying and explaining a genuine tension within the evidence, such as documents that point in opposite directions, and using that tension to refine your argument.
- Cross-period or cross-theme connection: Connecting the prompt's development to a different time period, geographic area, or thematic category in a way that deepens your argument rather than just mentioning another topic.
- Qualification: Acknowledging a significant exception or counterargument and explaining how it complicates rather than undermines your thesis.
Read your practice essay. Can you point to one specific sentence or passage that demonstrates complexity? Does it do more than mention a second topic? Does it explain how the complexity changes or deepens your argument?
| Does not earn complexity | Earns complexity |
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| 'The Thirty Years' War was similar to later conflicts like the Seven Years' War.' | 'While the Thirty Years' War began as a religious conflict within the Holy Roman Empire, its transformation into a dynastic struggle prefigures the secular balance-of-power logic that would define the Seven Years' War, suggesting that the Peace of Westphalia did not resolve religious tension so much as subordinate it to state interest, a shift that shaped European diplomacy for the next century.' |