Writing a thesis that only lists topics
A thesis that says 'This essay will discuss economic, political, and social factors' does not establish a line of reasoning. You need to explain how or why those factors produced the historical outcome in the prompt. The line of reasoning is the logic connecting your categories to your claim.
Treating contextualization as a one-sentence mention
The most common contextualization mistake is writing one sentence of background and moving on. Graders look for a developed description. Write a full paragraph that explains a broader trend, accurately describes it, and connects it to your argument before moving to your thesis.
Naming evidence without explaining what it proves
Listing the Silk Road, the Atlantic slave trade, and the Columbian Exchange in a paragraph does not earn the second evidence point. After each piece of evidence, write a sentence that explains what it demonstrates about your argument. The explanation is what earns the point, not the name.
Applying the wrong historical reasoning skill
If the prompt asks about causes of industrialization and you write a comparison essay, you will not earn the historical reasoning point. Read the prompt carefully, identify the skill it requires, and structure your thesis and body paragraphs around that skill.
Treating complexity as a separate paragraph at the end
Adding a paragraph at the end that says 'However, there were also other factors' without developing those factors does not earn the complexity point. Complexity must be woven into the argument. The most reliable approach is to build a qualified or multi-factor claim into your thesis and develop it throughout the essay.