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• 0:00

  Introduction to Commentary

• 0:31

  Evidence and Commentary Overview

• 1:04

  Zero Points in Commentary

• 1:35

  One Point in Commentary

• 2:06

  Two Points in Commentary

• 4:08

  Establishing Line of Reasoning

• 4:38

  Three Points in Commentary

• 6:42

  Four Points in Commentary

• 8:15

  Sophistication Point Introduction

• 8:47

  Changes in Rubric

• 10:19

  Approaching Sophistication

• 10:49

  Different Interpretations

• 13:27

  Exploring Complexities

• 15:33

  Broader Context in Argument

• 16:37

  Landlady Example Analysis

• 18:45

  Scoring First Example

• 20:18

  Commentary Strengths and Weaknesses

• 24:55

  Feedback on First Example

• 25:27

  Second Example Introduction

• 26:29

  Ominous Tone Analysis

• 28:32

  Possessive Characteristics

• 31:06

  Portrayal and Theme

• 35:16

  Sophistication in Style

• 36:50

  Q&A Session Begins

• 38:23

  Scoring Without Sophistication

• 41:01

  Exam Scoring Process

• 43:04

  Organizing Body Paragraphs

• 45:12

  Using Quotes Effectively

• 48:18

  Paragraph Structure Tips

• 49:49

  Thesis and Complexity

• 50:54

  Closing Remarks