ap lang - rhetorical analysis: live essay feedback

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• 0:00

  Introduction and Background

• 0:30

  New Rubric Explanation

• 1:01

  Stream Structure Overview

• 1:32

  Prompt Discussion

• 2:02

  Reading the Prompt

• 3:04

  Florence Kelly Background

• 4:08

  Audience Mindset Focus

• 5:10

  Speech Reading Begins

• 7:15

  Juxtaposition in Speech

• 8:47

  North-South Divide Analysis

• 10:51

  Northern States Critique

• 12:54

  Connecting to Voting Rights

• 15:27

  Guilt and Responsibility

• 17:01

  Call to Action

• 17:32

  Thesis Statement Tips

• 19:06

  Student Thesis Examples

• 21:15

  Second Thesis Feedback

• 23:55

  Question on Voting Rights

• 25:58

  Body Paragraph Planning

• 28:34

  Embedding Quotes Example

• 31:42

  Quoting Advice

• 32:43

  First Body Paragraph Feedback

• 37:55

  Second Body Paragraph Analysis

• 42:34

  Snippet Feedback

• 46:40

  Deep Analysis Example

• 49:51

  Audience Focus Question

• 51:55

  Final Example Analysis

• 55:35

  Audience Emphasis

• 57:08

  Prompt Task Reminder

• 59:11

  Essay Grading Question

• 1:01:45

  Teacher Feedback Clarification

• 1:03:16

  Hook Recommendation

• 1:04:19

  Closing Remarks