Writing a thesis that only restates the prompt
A thesis like 'There are many factors that affect this issue' or 'The author uses rhetorical devices to persuade the audience' earns zero thesis points. Your thesis must make a specific, arguable claim. On the argument essay, state your position. On the rhetorical analysis, name specific choices and their effect.
Listing rhetorical devices without analyzing effect
Identifying ethos, pathos, and logos in separate paragraphs without explaining how each choice affects the audience is one of the most common patterns in low-scoring rhetorical analysis essays. Every device you name must be connected to the writer's purpose and the reader's response.
Summarizing sources instead of using them as evidence
In the synthesis essay, moving from source to source and describing what each one says does not earn evidence and commentary points. You must use sources to support your own argument. The commentary explaining how a source supports your specific thesis is what earns credit.
Choosing MCQ answers based on what sounds best
For writing questions, the most formal or sophisticated-sounding revision is not always correct. The correct answer improves the draft's coherence, organization, or clarity. Always ask what specific problem the revision solves.
Treating the sophistication point as a bonus for long essays
The sophistication point is not awarded for essay length, vocabulary level, or including a counterargument sentence at the end. It requires nuanced thinking sustained throughout the essay, such as genuinely qualifying your argument or exploring the complexity of the issue.