Screenwriting II

✍️Screenwriting II Unit 14 – Professional Screenplay Submission Prep

Professional screenplay submission prep is a crucial skill for aspiring screenwriters. This unit covers the essential elements of crafting a polished submission package, including formatting, loglines, synopses, and treatments. It also delves into industry standards and best practices for presenting your work. Understanding the submission process and navigating various platforms is key to getting your screenplay noticed. The unit explores different types of submissions, common mistakes to avoid, and the importance of tailoring your approach to each opportunity. It emphasizes the need for persistence and continuous improvement in the competitive screenwriting market.

Key Concepts and Industry Standards

  • Understand the importance of adhering to industry standards when submitting a screenplay
  • Familiarize yourself with the key elements of a professional screenplay submission package (logline, synopsis, treatment, script)
  • Recognize the significance of proper formatting and presentation in making a positive first impression on industry professionals
  • Develop a clear understanding of the various stages of the screenplay submission process (querying, submitting, follow-up)
  • Learn about the different types of screenplay submissions (unsolicited, solicited, contests, fellowships)
  • Identify the most common mistakes writers make when submitting their screenplays and how to avoid them
  • Understand the role of agents, managers, and producers in the screenplay submission process

Screenplay Formatting Essentials

  • Adhere to industry-standard formatting guidelines for screenplays (font, margins, page numbers, scene headings)
  • Use proper screenplay software (Final Draft, Movie Magic Screenwriter) to ensure consistent formatting throughout your script
  • Understand the importance of using a clear, legible font (Courier, 12-point) for readability
  • Ensure that your script follows the standard page count for your genre (90-120 pages for feature films, 30-60 pages for TV pilots)
  • Utilize proper scene headings (INT./EXT., LOCATION, DAY/NIGHT) to clearly convey the setting and time of each scene
  • Format dialogue and action lines correctly to enhance the flow and pacing of your script
    • Indent dialogue and keep it centered on the page
    • Use short, concise action lines to describe essential visual elements
  • Include proper transitions (CUT TO:, FADE IN:, FADE OUT.) to indicate changes in scenes or sequences

Crafting a Compelling Logline

  • A logline is a one to two-sentence summary of your screenplay that captures its core concept, main character, and central conflict
  • Keep your logline concise, typically between 25-50 words
  • Introduce your protagonist and their primary goal or motivation
  • Identify the main obstacle or antagonistic force that stands in the way of the protagonist achieving their goal
  • Hint at the stakes or consequences the protagonist faces if they fail to overcome the obstacle
  • Avoid revealing the ending or specific plot twists in your logline
  • Use strong, active verbs to convey a sense of action and momentum
  • Ensure your logline is clear, engaging, and leaves the reader wanting to know more about your story

Writing an Effective Synopsis

  • A synopsis is a brief summary of your screenplay's plot, typically one to two pages in length
  • Begin your synopsis by introducing your main characters and their roles in the story
  • Summarize the key events and turning points of your plot in chronological order
    • Include the inciting incident, rising action, climax, and resolution
  • Focus on the main storyline and avoid including subplots or minor characters that don't directly impact the central narrative
  • Use present tense and third-person point of view when writing your synopsis
  • Highlight the emotional journey of your protagonist and how they change throughout the story
  • Conclude your synopsis by revealing the story's resolution and the protagonist's final state
  • Maintain a clear, concise writing style that conveys the essence of your story without excessive detail

Developing a Strong Treatment

  • A treatment is a detailed outline of your screenplay, typically ranging from 5-15 pages
  • Begin with a brief introduction that includes your logline and sets the stage for the story
  • Divide your treatment into three acts (setup, confrontation, resolution) to provide a clear structure
  • Provide a more in-depth description of each key scene, including essential dialogue and action
  • Develop your characters by exploring their motivations, conflicts, and relationships
  • Highlight the main themes and subtext of your story and how they are woven throughout the narrative
  • Include any relevant backstory or world-building elements that are crucial to understanding the story
  • Conclude your treatment by summarizing the resolution and the impact of the story on your characters and their world

Polishing Your Script for Submission

  • Conduct multiple rounds of revisions to refine your screenplay's structure, pacing, and dialogue
  • Ensure that your script adheres to proper formatting guidelines and industry standards
  • Proofread your script for spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors
  • Seek feedback from trusted peers, writing groups, or professional script consultants to identify areas for improvement
  • Implement feedback and make necessary revisions to strengthen your script's overall quality
  • Read your script aloud to identify awkward phrasing, unnatural dialogue, or pacing issues
  • Trim any unnecessary scenes, dialogue, or description that don't serve the story or characters
  • Ensure that your script has a clear beginning, middle, and end, with a satisfying resolution

Creating a Standout Title Page

  • Your title page is the first impression an industry professional will have of your screenplay
  • Include the title of your screenplay, centered and in all caps, about halfway down the page
  • Below the title, include the phrase "Written by" followed by your name
  • In the bottom left corner, include your contact information (name, address, phone number, email)
  • In the bottom right corner, include the date of the draft and any relevant registration numbers (WGA, copyright)
  • Keep the title page simple, clean, and professional, avoiding any unnecessary graphics or decorations
  • Use the same font and formatting as the rest of your screenplay (Courier, 12-point)
  • Ensure that the title on your title page matches the title used throughout your submission package (logline, synopsis, treatment)

Assembling Your Submission Package

  • A submission package typically includes a query letter, logline, synopsis, treatment, and the first 10-15 pages of your script
  • Begin with a professional query letter that introduces yourself, your screenplay, and why you believe it would be a good fit for the recipient
  • Include a brief logline that captures the essence of your story and entices the reader to learn more
  • Attach a one to two-page synopsis that summarizes the key plot points and character arcs of your screenplay
  • Include a detailed treatment (5-15 pages) that provides a more in-depth overview of your story, characters, and themes
  • Provide the first 10-15 pages of your polished screenplay to give the reader a sense of your writing style and the story's opening
  • Ensure that all elements of your submission package are properly formatted and free of errors
  • Save each document as a separate PDF file with clear, professional file names (e.g., "Screenplay_Title_Synopsis.pdf")
  • Research and identify the most appropriate submission platforms and opportunities for your screenplay (The Black List, Script Revolution, ISA)
  • Carefully review the submission guidelines for each platform or contest to ensure that your screenplay meets their requirements
  • Create a spreadsheet or tracking system to organize your submissions and keep track of deadlines, responses, and follow-ups
  • Tailor your query letter and submission package to each specific recipient, highlighting why your screenplay is a good fit for their company or contest
  • Be patient and persistent in your submissions, understanding that the process can take time and may involve rejection
  • Follow up on your submissions in a professional and courteous manner, adhering to any specified timelines or guidelines
  • Continue to refine and improve your screenplay based on any feedback or insights gained from the submission process
  • Stay informed about industry trends, news, and opportunities to maximize your chances of success in the competitive screenplay market


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